Sunday, October 21, 2012

Childhood Story

I don’t know why but I can’t remember a lot from my childhood , But I can tell you I had a really good and fun one like when I was a toddler my uncle had brought me a tricycle and I was in my backyard riding it when I thought to myself I wonder if I could ride without any hand’s and my eye’s close. So I started riding and then shut my eye’s and let my hand’s go next thing you know I was all wet and gold because I had went in to the swimming pool. Then my uncle had to jump in and get me but since I didn’t wanna let my tricycle go he had to bring it out with me. I Also Can Remember  the warm feeling from sitting in a basket of clothes after it just came out the dryer when ever my mom had wash and dry clothes and it had the house smelling pretty good. I still can remember the day’s  my older cousin’s teaching me how to play basketball and the days we (me and my friends) always  went to the store after we got done playing Hide Go Seek. I also can remember playing videos games and sport’s with my brother’s and cousin’s a lot while i was younger. The main thing i can remember is one vacation with my dad and his wife and her kid’s, I forgot where we had visit but i can tell you I would love to go there again, the air felt more clear the the view was beautiful and the weather was nice wear they  showed me how to dig for clams by the seashore . But it’s one thing that i hated to do when i was younger and that is when my mom made me stay in the house on friday’s and read a book for an Hour long, then she made me tell her what the book was about while my friends was outside having fun. But as i look back to my childhood i had a pretty good one and i thank everyone that help me have a good and fun childhood.

4 comments:

  1. It sounds like you had a pretty fun childhood. I can't remember much of my childhood neither. Your writing was very good, but you had just small punctuation errors, Other than that I enjoyed reading your story.

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  2. I think you did really good on this. you misspelled a few words that you can fix. you could have done a better job of painting a mental image on the readers mind and describing everything you did.you could go back and change some words that can apply better to your sentences.I really liked the story and what you did when you were a child really good job.

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  3. Your story was excellent. You put words in the wrong places though. it seems like you had a very fun childhood. I used to do some of the same things when i was a child.

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  4. i liked your story. but you but words in the wrong places and theres some missing commas, and periods and you put "I remember" to many times, but everything else is excellent and i had good times too with my friend my mom did the same with reading so i know how that feels.

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