I
have only lived in two homes that I can actually remember. This was the
home that I moved in right after my moms death. So that will always be
the main memory of my house. This memory will never leave because this
is the first house we did not have someone cook for us every night, help
us keep the house clean, and also help run the house. That was a big
difference. My mom was always there for me in my other house. My house
was also in a whole another environment and culture. I came from the
Piper District.
This house will never be forgotten because it is the oldest house
standing in all of Argentine. When we bought it, it was already more
than 150 years old. It was a nice house, nothing was wrong with it being
as old as it was. We had to refurnish the kitchen because it was too
old. The people before us used it. In my house we have two stair cases.
One is wooden and the other is carpeted. The one that is wood was for
the slaves and servants, while the other was for the masters and owners
of the house. One thing that is significant about this house is that in the 1800’s they turned it into a bed and breakfast for couples. On every floor there is a kitchen. In each kitchen there is a refrigerator, a stove, a sink, and everything any other kitchen has. Altogether we have three kitchens. We also have 5 full bathrooms, four living rooms, and five bedrooms. This is probably the biggest house I have ever lived in.
Another reason why this house will always be a memory is because of my behavior. As I mentioned in earlier in my paper, I did not have my mom there for me. It was just me, my dad, and two of my brothers. I was the only girl in the house. My grades started to drop. I did not have a parent there for me to help me with my school work. I remember sitting in the kitchen and crying because I had no idea how to do the homework I was assigned for the night. I felt like
I was all by myself.
As things became more hectic, we needed housekeepers. Our housekeepers would come every other week and help us clean our house (they were not much help). As my brothers got older, they graduated from high shcool and went to college, which means it was just me n my dad. My dad became the president of Penn Valley Community College, which means I was at home more by myself. My 8th grade year, I got into fights, was disrespectful, and did not care about my grades (does not sound like “Me”). I would get in a lot of trouble. My dad was still strict even thought he would always be at work. When he came home I would hear my consequences, and have to deal with his attitude.
My most recent memory is doing online classes at home. I would spend five days a week in the kitchen doing school. It was horrible. No teachers, no friends, no one to talk to. I did have a friend of the family that would help me when I needed it, but other than her it was so boring. I will never forget doing school in my big blue kitchen and I will never forget the huge, yellow, tall house on the corner of 14th and Ruby.
Going to middle school my eighth grade year I used to walk past your house in aw because I found it huge and inspiring in a fact that it was different from all the other houses I walked by. I didn't know the history of the old house and I'm glad I finally got to know what the house was used for. Also, I think this story is good, however it sad because of the loss of your mother.
ReplyDeletei think your story was good you described the house very well and told about its past and what it was used for. i have been through a similar situation when my parents got divorced. i don't think you need to fix anything. it was a good narrative.
ReplyDeleteIn this story what caught my interest the most was the house in this story. The description of the design of this new old house really amazed my. From the three kitchens, the five bathrooms, to even the bedrooms it all amazed me. I was really surprised to find out that the house was 150 years old and that the house was a bed and breakfast in the 1800's. I was also equal surprised that the house had a stair case for slaves and one for slave owners. I thought the narrator of this story did a good job putting these details into the story. In the fifth paragraph there was one error where "me n dad" should have been me and dad. Other than that I thought the story was great.
ReplyDeleteYour memory is great. I would recommend more descriptions, especially about the house itself, i feel this would give off more emotional attachment. There are some grammatical errors, like the word "work" after school. Your choice of words can also be improved. For example you can substitute some words for less utilized words. Overall i like your story even though it is very sad. Well thanks for writing and sharing it! Bye-Bye.
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